Tuesday, May 25, 2010

hey this is roy's e learning assignment because he lost his blog password. So here it is (:

Rainbow Death

America did not foresee

Green, pink, purple and other colors death potpourri!

Expecting others to pay a high price.

Now thinking twice?

Toll on the innocent and unborn.

Omnipotent and disregarding who will mourn.

Reflective about all the illness, birth defects and prematurely dead.

All the deceit continues to spread.

Nefariously America led astray -

Generations untold WILL pay -

Execrable effects of agent orange spray!

Hubert Wilson

Point of View: Americans wanted to win the Vietnam war badly, and would resort to anything for that. Because of that, they used the highly dangerous Agent Orange on the Vietnamese, however they did not foresee the consequence. They expected the Vietnamese "to pay a high price", but now they are "thinking twice" because the Agent Orange not only affected the Vietnamese, but also affected they themselves, "tolling on the innocent and unborn", causing innocent people to be killed.

Situation and setting:

Sadness - "toll on the innocent and unborn". Because of the war and the use of Agent Orange, many innocent people have been killed, thus causing a sad setting, together with the use of "toll", a harsh word, which means that the lives have to be sacrificed in order to win the war.

Harsh setting - "Generations untold WILL pay". By emphasizing on the word, "WILL", it causes a harsh setting as the younger generations will be paying the prices for what the older generations had caused. Also, "Expecting others to pay a high price" also creates a harsh setting as though the USA are going to make the Vietnam have a life worse than death.

Language/Diction:

"potpourri" - is a mixture of dried materials. In this poem, potpourri is used to refer to the combination of the deaths of many people caused by the combinations of the different Agents.

"toll" - is the number of deaths resulting from some particular cause such as war. In this poem, toll is used to refer to the necessary deaths/sacrifices of the people regardless whether they are from the same country for USA to win the war.

Personal response: I feel that war is harsh and kills many innocent lives. The Vietnam War caused many people to be killed and made the future generations pay for the price as they face the effects of the Agent Orange. Hence i share the same sentiments as the writer that we have to think twice before starting a war as war are not over when war are over. The effects of the war will remain and harm our future generations which are innocent, we should not make them pay for what we had done.

Author

Hubert Wilson is a Vietnam War veteran who served in the USAF Security Service. Along with a dozen or so intelligence school grads, he prepped for about 14 months at Kelly AFB in San Antonio, Texas. before being sent to Vietnam or elsewhere in southeat Asia in 1970. About half of them ended up in Da Nang , an Agent Orange hotspot. The rest of them were assigned to Shemya Island, Alaska, which was a more contaminated environment than Da Nang!

His health problems started approximately 15 years ago with unexplained headaches and limb pains. Four years ago his central nervous system radically deteriorated with Parkinsonian type tremors, severe headaches, progressive limb pains, etc. No physician has ever diagnosed the specific illness. He suspected that it could be due to the heavily contaminated drinking water at Shemya during his year there. Organo-phosphate toxins may not run their toxic course until 20 to 30 years after initial exposure.

Since his brain still functions moderately well, he have turned to writing just like his late Father.


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8:07 PM

This post is about the english e learning.

Rainbow Death Conflict
This conflict occurred during the Vietnam War from 1962 to 1971. The reason why this conflict was significant both to the Vietnamese and the Americans was because of the Americans engaging in Herbicidal Warfare with their gas weapon code named “Agent Orange”. Agent Orange is the code name for a herbicide and defoliant, contaminated with TCDD, used by the U.S. military in its Herbicidal Warfare program during the Vietnam War. This Herbicide weapon cased much agony and deaths of the Vietnamese people due to its horrific effects, Birth Defects and disabilities. Agent Orange was by far the most widely used herbicide in the range of herbicides developed by the American Army called “Rainbow Herbicides” which ranged from Agent Blue to Agent White. Agent Orange resulted in 400,000 deaths and disabilities along with 500,000 children born with birth defects.

Analysis of Rainbow Death
1. Point of View (Elaboration): This poem is written in an intellectual point of view which zooms in the situation as a whole, this point of view sufficiently shows the horrors and pain the Americans had caused even on the innocent Vietnamese people. This is evident from “America did not foresee”, “Now Thinking Twice?”, “Nefariously America led astray”. This shows their wrongdoing and urgent need to stop such herbicide warfare to prevent any more agony to occur. It could also be written in a third person point of view because “America” which is repeated in the poem for its wrong acts from their herbicide weapon could instead be personified as another person in the poem.

2. Situation and Setting (Elaboration): The situation as stated in “Rainbow Death” is extremely dire and poses as a great threat to the Vietnamese people and this situation takes place in a setting combining both history ( “New step towards Herbicide Warfare for the Americans”) and agony ( Horrific effects of Agent Orange). The nature of this conflict is a combination of ethics and social characteristics. “ America did not foresee” and “Green, pink, purple and other colour deaths potpourri” shows that America did not truly expect that the effects of their different coloured herbicides would be so horrific but it also shows the element of development of their herbicides weapons because the development of Rainbow Herbicides effectively meant advancement in such a warfare , the success could also be derived from the horrific effects of the herbicides. “Generations untold WILL pay”-“Execrable effects of the Orange Spray” shows that the horrific effects of the “Agent Orange” Spray will be passed on to the next generation of Vietnamese people ,affecting the lives of the children about to be born. Thus, there is a signal for low ethic level of the Americans as they did not care for the next generation and also a social signal as the conflict involving the herbicides will leave a mark , permanently scar society forever.

3. Language and Diction ( Elaboration ) :The Language can convey the poet’s main message as it is used to reveal the truth behind the American’s herbicidal weapons in the Vietnam War. Personification is used as America was personified as a person causing untold suffering towards the American people. The Diction magnifies the speaker’s tone which seems sarcastic. This is evident from “America did not foresee” and “Now thinking twice?”, this had established the tone of sarcasm. Despite America not being able to foresee the pain and agony the herbicides would cause to the people to such a great extent , they failed to think twice as seen from the “?” , implying that even after the Americans realised the horrific effects of herbicidal warfare , they continued to implement such a measure , signifying their little regret and guiltiness. Moreover, “Nefariously America Led astray” and “Generations untold will PAY” implies more of a tone of sarcasm and being adamant from reality. America consistently implemented herbicidal warfare which led to America going against its principle of freedom and morale, America’s thirst to defeat the enemy had overwhelmed their principals which in turn will cause the birth defects and disabilities of future generations of the Vietnamese people.

4(a) Personal Response (Elaboration): I finally learnt an important principal : We should never resolve to war and all matter should instead be resolved diplomatically. This is evident from “Generations untold will PAY” this magnifies the horrors and agony war could cause and so the disappearance of what we termed as a human if we continue on a bloodthirsty quest to start wars and wipe out our enemy without any consideration of the pain that would be implemented on them. War causes us to override our life principals , the pillars which create our conscience and war ultimately unleashes the evil within all of us.


Bibliography: http://www.warpoetry.co.uk/2010warpoetry.html


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8:05 PM

Saturday, March 13, 2010

Hey everyone, sorry for not posting in a very long time. Have been really busy with lots of stuff and partly lazy.

Anyway, recently I have been training really hard for my softball competition nationals and our team have done really well for our last two games. Both games were pretty hard as we were playing strong opponents in our group for the first two games. We were quite nervous to start with as this was our first game in nationals and to add to it, we were playing a seeded team. However, We played extremely well :D we scored 6 runs in the first inning, followed by 14 runs in the second inning and 6 runs again in the third inning. And throughout these 3 innings, we only let in 1 run. The score was then 26-1 and the game ended due to " mercy rule" which means that if a team is winning by too much and it seems that the opponent is not able to catch up, the game is ended by the umpire.

So the second game was against another strong team, who had a very fast pitcher. They caught us unprepared as many of us could not hit his ball. Hence, coach came up with a plan to bunt the pitcher's ball as the fielders were unable to play us out. We executed the plan and and bunted every inning, putting pressure on the pitcher, scoring 6 runs in total and winning 6-0 overall.

Our defense has been quite good as we have only let in a run in both of games. So if we can keep our defense up, we will have a very good chance of going far in this competition and our target (hopefully!) is a top four position!! Wish us luck :)

9:42 PM

Monday, March 1, 2010

Hello everyone. Haven't posted anything in very long as I have been quite busy due to much work and testsss....D: but its alright dont miss me too much.;) anyways ill be posting on my learning profile and write in no less than 100 words the implications and what i feel about the Multiple Intelligence test. Now onto the actual serious work J: ok,here i go then ^^
i feel that the test does not really reflect my personality much though, as the results does not match with what i see of myself, but the Qns in the test did make me think about my character and though the results did not match my real self, i think it was a good experience to do this test and I would sincerely like to do more of these types of tests as I feel it would give me a better gauge of my personality and allow me to understand myself better, and in turn improving myself as a person. In conclusion, I think that the multiple intelligence test was beneficial.

4:23 PM

Saturday, February 13, 2010

Hello everyone!! So Chinese New Year is tomorrow. Haha, really excited. But today, New Years Eve went to my grandmother's house for lunch with the whole family. Then stayed there for awhile before going home. Now at home, not doing much, waiting for dinner as my other grandmother coming over for dinner. Steamboat I think (: Anyway, these few days has been quite unlucky. Tomorrow's Chinese New Year 1st day/Valentine's Day/My birthday and I'm falling sick today. Bad sore throat and cough. Damn unlucky ): Hope I can recover by tonight or else have to stay home tomorrow when everyone is going out!!
Anyway, yesterday went back to primary school after school ended with Samuel and yu chuan and some others. Played in school before going to ITE to play soccer. Wasn't very fun as all the teachers that taught me in my primary school had all left. So at about two, Roy came to my school then me, him, Samuel, Kyle took a cab to Jurong Point to meet Chong hon. So once we were there, ate lunch then walked around. I had to find my CNY day two shirt so once like looking for it. So we walked around before Samuel and Kyle wanted to go play xbox at challenger, nothing better to do I think. So the three of us just continued walking around and looking at stuff till like 5 plus. Then Roy had to leave so Chong Hon and I decided to go watch " Valentine's Day". Mainly because it had a lot of stars in it. The movie was quite nice and funny except that it was a valentine movie, meaning it had a lot of couples there and made us, two guys, look awkard. Haha. But in the end ok la. So after the movie about 8 plus, went to eat dinner and then went home.
That's about it then. bye

12:42 AM

Sunday, February 7, 2010

Hey everyone. Today is like finally the only free day i had to blog.haha. So these few days has been quite fun and like easy-going?

So basically on Thursday, the whole day was quite ok and fun. Till music. We all had to sing this Chinese song called " Man Jiang Hong ". It's like a Hwa Chong song and stuff so we were supposed to memorise how to sing. And I completely forgotten!! Only know the first verse. So when it was my row's turn to like sing, the teacher was looking at all of us and I happened to be like,right in front of her. Then sing sing sing awhile I started to forget the lyrics so began mouthing,then after that i saw her staring at me, knowing that i mouthing, so I just no choice continue. And maybe cause my Chinese quite sucky,so not only she gave me a 'fair',she asked me," Are you Singaporean?" WTH la,damn insulting. Almost everyone always first time see me ask if I Singaporean one. Its damn irritating. So i just said yes then the remaining lesson just don't care her.

Friday, just some math test towards end of the day. Easier then expected (: except last question, don't know how to do. Saturday, did some work and rested throughout the day,then relatives came over to celebrate my birthday :D Haha, quite fun. They stayed till like 11 plus then sing birthday song go home. Today,spent whole day at new house, talking to the interior designer on decoration for house and stuff. Also quite boring. Then now doing project due tonight! So have to rush. Haha, ok, that's all for now,bye.

3:25 AM

Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Hey everyone, so sorry for like not posting so long,been really busy. Everyday homework, training etc. Finally got some spare time (: So now will just catch up and post about the past few days.

Monday

Monday was like damn fun, Straight after school was senior's match at RI. So team mates and I went to J8 to eat. Then once we reach there, my teammate said bishan gay at KFC, then I thought that wasy like a myth?? Haha. Cause never see him before what. SO we just go there see see. Then when we went there, He was actually there!! Lol, then nevermind, we decided to eat there anyway( not because he was there but cause of the food!). While finding a table,he keep eyeballing us,then we just dao la,but after that he still go push his specs up then give me the most sicko look,eyebrows up,eyes blink at me,WTH LA. then still go take his phone out try take photo. Then after that we run away. Haha. So in the end went Pizza Hut eat, then o to game and blabla..

go here to see him if u haven't yet: http://www.facebook.com/#!/pages/Bishan-Gay/66937553022?ref=search&sid=1056682266.31582979..1

Tuseday

Nothing much happened in school, just after school go do some self training. But, when went home meet my mum, she told me she got me a iphone (: (: HAHA. Her company got some special ties with Singtel then can get the phone cheap,so she help me get. So spent most of the night setting it up and downloading some stuff.


Today

Err morning go com lab IS lesson, quite boring. Then go PE,had to run 3.5km -.- So tired already from training. So Ch, Nixon and I just run/walk, took 20 mins. Haha. Decided skip soccer during recess,stayed in class eat and talk with kevin Ch. Then lessons, and MUSIC. Now hate music la, stupid teacher, ask me if I'm Singaporean. Just like my Primary school chinese teacher, say I look like Malay, damn insulting la, almost like everyone I know first time see me also say I malay..

So anyway that's about it. Then Friday still got Math test. So now need do some other stuff,will try to blog tmr,or maybe Friday. Bye!

6:54 AM

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